I need help on the finalization of our company Quality, Environmental, Health & Safety Policy.
My colleague has proposed the following:
As one of the leading manufacturers of die-casting and precision machining, Altum Precision is committed to provide Quality Products & Services in an Environmental friendly, safety and healthy work environment that will conform to meet the specifications and requirements of our customers as well as statutory & regulatory requirements.I have proposed what is below, as we only manufacture & sell cast & machined parts & we do not offer services such as machining or casting. Further, i believe that "will conform" implies that we may not be conforming now. Statutory & regulatory requirements means only those laws that are enacted, not the guidelines outlined by the statutory bodies which we would be required to comply to, to be certified for ISO 14000, or OSHA 18000.
As a leading manufacturer of precision die-cast & machined components, Altum Precision is committed to providing quality products & service in an environmentally friendly, safe & healthy work environment that conforms to the specifications & requirements of our customers, as well as, requirements of statutory & regulatory bodies.I welcome comments from competent individuals who can provide a good analysis of the 2 statements.