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    Default Please help with this grammar

    I noticed from Ada that the instruction books needs three days arrive to them upon / against your confirmation and the units will be finished by this Thursday. Please keep me the update status, so that we can let QC to planning their schedule for the final inspection, as they are shortage of manpower right now.

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    Default Re: Please help with this grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    I noticed from Ada that the instruction books needs three days arrive to them upon / against your confirmation and the units will be finished by this Thursday. Please keep me the update status, so that we can let QC to planning their schedule for the final inspection, as they are shortage of manpower right now.
    I note from Ada (?) that the books take three days to arrive following your confirmation (of my order) and will be completed next Thursday. Please keep me updated as (because) QC are short of manpower right now and will need to plan their schedule for final inspection.

    Hope this represents what you are trying to say.

    Dave

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    Default Re: Please help with this grammar

    Hi Dave,

    How about this revision :

    I noted from Ada that the draft of instruction books was sent you yesterday, and which is need to take three days to ordrer them after / upon your confirmation. The units / goods will be completed by this Thursday. Please keep me updated as (because) QC are short of manpower right now and will need to plan their schedule for final inspection.

    Please review again when you have time. Thanks

    Regards,
    Zoe

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    Default Re: Please help with this grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post

    Ada has notified us that the instruction books were sent to you yesterday. It takes three days to order them after your confirmation. The goods will be completed by this Thursday. Please keep me updated as QC are short of manpower right now and will need to plan their schedule for final inspection.
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