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    please check my grammar

    Wonder ask me to explain you more details regarding the ICTI certificate, because Rebecca is concern that the certificate cannot be updated as the shipment date is in July 25 for PO xxx. They can use the existing certificate, it expires 31 July 2008.

    The next factory audit will be conducted in coming July, and the certificate will be issued in August with 12 months validity (Aug 08 to July 09). We will try to push the factory provide this to us in earlier in order to make your customer to feel relieved. Is this explanation ok for you? Please advise us if you need any further details.

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    Exclamation Re: please check my grammar

    Wonder asked me to explain you in more details regarding the ICTI certificate, because Rebecca is concerned/worried that the certificate (can) may not be updated as the shipment date is in July 25 for PO xxx. They can use the existing certificate, which (it) expires 31 July 2008.

    The next factory audit will be conducted in coming July, and the certificate will be issued in August with 12 months validity (Aug 08 to July 09). We will try to push the factory to provide this to us (in) earlier in order to make your customer (to) feel relieved. Is this explanation ok for you? Please advise us if you need any further (details) clarification.

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