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    NewHope is offline Senior Member
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    Default Is the sentence okay?

    World meets at rise of moon!

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    Default Re: Is the sentence okay?

    Quote Originally Posted by NewHope
    World meets at rise of moon!
    World meets at the rise of the moon.

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    I felt "the' is redundant here.

    Because we can say "at rise of sun".

    Terser!

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    Quote Originally Posted by NewHope
    I felt "the' is redundant here.

    Because we can say "at rise of sun".

    Terser!
    I would say at the rise of the sun...there is only one sun and one moon.


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