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    sbaj is offline Newbie
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    Smile please check my letter

    hello, I would be greatfull if someone checks and maybe add something to my letter. thanks!



    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am a student of Fashion Design from (my country) and would like to know if (company's name) has any office in my country and maybe an internship program.
    I have been very interested in trend research and my professor told me about you.
    I was enchanted with your work and how the information is transmited in a delightfull but concrete way.
    Having the chance to get to know more about this part of the Design world would be a one of a kind experience.

    Sincerely,

    My name
    Last edited by sbaj; 30-May-2008 at 03:40.

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    Re: please check my letter

    just discussing with you:
    "I am a student who major in trend design in (my country) and would like to know if (your company) has any office or internship programme in my country.
    .....
    would be one of good experience

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    sbaj is offline Newbie
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    Re: please check my letter

    thank you for the help.

    but I have a question..

    if I say "who major in trend design" mens that I have a lot of knowledge about the subject, am I right?

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    Re: please check my letter

    "I have been very interested in trend research and my professor told me about you."

    I'd like to make a suggestion:
    "I'm interested in research trend and that's why I'm quite happy while learning about you from my professor"

    "who major in trend design" means you're graduated from a school specializing in trend design.

    Good luck to you in your job application.
    Best regards

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    Re: please check my letter

    Quote Originally Posted by sbaj View Post
    hello, I would be greatfull if someone checks and maybe add something to my letter. thanks!



    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am a student of Fashion Design from (my country) and would like to know if (company's name) has any office in my country and maybe an internship program.

    I have been very interested in trend research and my professor told me about you. I was enchanted with your work and how the information is transmitted in a delightful but concrete way.

    Having the chance to get to know more about this part of the Design world would be a one of a kind experience.

    I can be contacted on my mobile [number] or by email [address].

    Yours faithfully,

    My name
    .

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