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    correct articles if possible

    I would be grateful if you could have a look at the articles in this sentence (if there r other problems, i am grateful for any type of comments)

    thank you

    ...These natural advantages--coupled with the steadiness in the direction of the monsoons over the Indian Ocean and China Sea--aided the Indians to acquire that nautical skill and enterprise due to which we have a rich history in the field of Naval Architecture and Ship Building

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    Re: correct articles if possible

    -- should this be a comma?

    steadiness of the direction of the monsoons..

    ...and enterprise due to which we have...
    Doesn this sound better?
    ...and enterprise from which we have....

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    Re: correct articles if possible

    Perhaps:
    These natural advantages--coupled with the consistency in the direction of the monsoons over the Indian Ocean and China Sea--aided the Indians in acquiring that nautical skill and enterprise due to which we have a rich history in the field of Naval Architecture and Ship Building.

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