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      • Student or Learner
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      • Arabic
      • Home Country:
      • Saudi Arabia
      • Current Location:
      • Saudi Arabia

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    #1

    correct the text

    *correct the text

    I am Sadia
    I am born in 1986
    I am raised by this honored man(father)
    I am married and I have tow children girl and boy*
    I studied all stages of general education at my village*
    after that I got married and moved to Ynbou city because my husband was working there .I lived there 4 years and then moved to Jeddah city and enrolled in Saudi Electronic University*
    My hobbies:
    I like writing my diary*
    I like cooking because the cooking is a wonderful world*
    I like drawing to express about my feelings
    My wishes:
    I want to be obedient for my parents*
    I want to get bachular with high degrees*
    I want to raise my children in a good way*
    Thank you for your time and i hope you enjoy my cv
    Pleas correct text*
    and write me back

    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
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      • Native Language:
      • English
      • Home Country:
      • United States
      • Current Location:
      • United States

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    #2

    Re: correct the text

    All the statement are correct but in some statement above will need a punctuation mark and full-stop.

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