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    abuasim is offline Newbie
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    I am Sadia
    I am born in 1986
    I am raised by this honored man(father)
    I am married and I have tow children girl and boy
    I studied all stages of general education at my village
    after that I got married and moved to Ynbou city because my husband was working there .I lived there 4 years and then moved to Jeddah city and enrolled in Saudi Electronic University
    My hobbies:
    I like writing my diary
    I like cooking because the cooking is a wonderful world
    I like drawing to express about my feelings
    My wishes:
    I want to be obedient for my parents
    I want to get bachular with high degrees
    I want to raise my children in a good way
    Thank you for your time and i hope you enjoy my cv
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    and write me back

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    abuasim is offline Newbie
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    Please correct for me plz

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    Default Re: correct the text

    Every sentence needs to end with a period or some other suitable punctuation mark. You can begin there.

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    abuasim is offline Newbie
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    Please correct in meaning, order,grammatical issues

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    Default Re: correct the text

    You correct the punctuation first, then we will look at the rest. Also, please tell us when you will submit your homework to your teacher.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    abuasim is offline Newbie
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    Hurry up to correct punctuation and every thing else u see it if it is a mistake
    Many thanks for u

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    Default Re: correct the text

    Quote Originally Posted by SoothingDave View Post
    Every sentence needs to end with a period or some other suitable punctuation mark. You can begin there.
    Yes, punctuation mark is the very important factor in writing articles or any sentences. So, try to frame your sentence in a complete manner.

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