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    You have had a class discussion on modern technology. Your teacher has asked you to write a composition giving your opinion on the following statement:

    Our world would be much better without television.

    In today’s world nearly every family has got a TV, often more than one. It is quite common to have one TV in a living room and second in a kitchen.

    Some people claim that one does not need to have any TV. They think that watching TV is waste of one time. They say if people especially children spend a lot of time in front of TV screen, the result could be the health problems such as headache, obesity and problems with communication.

    However, other people believe that this opinion is errorneous. If one wishes to watch TV in reasonable way and carefully selects which programs one will be watch it could be allright. For example, if one watches The News every day, it is interesting, because it lasts about 30 minutes and one can know the latest news.

    To sum up, it seems to me that watching TV is useful if one does not spend too much time on it. Every person should not forget reading books, doing exercise or any other hobbies, how to spend his free time.

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    Our world would be much better without television

    In today's world nearly every family has got a TV, and often more than one. It is quite common to have a TV in the living room and in the kitchen.

    Some people claim that one does not need to have a TV. They think that watching TV is waste of one's time. They say if people, children especially, spend a lot of time in front of the TV screen, the result could be health problems such as headaches, obesity, and problems with communication.

    Others, however, believe that this opinion is errorneous. If one wishes to watch TV in a reasonable way and carefully selects which programs one watches, it could be all right. For example, watching the news every day is not only interesting, it lasts only about 30 minutes.

    Watching TV is useful if one does not spend too much time doing it. People should not forget about reading books, doing exercise, their hobbies or other activities they can do in their free time.

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