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    Default paraphrasing of three sentences

    Dear teachers,

    Would you be kind enough verify the following paraphrasing of the next three sentences?

    1.1. This was revealed in a letter written some time ago.
    1.2. This was disclosed in a letter written some time ago.
    1.3. This came to light in a letter written some time ago.

    2.1. He didnít reveal his feelings.
    2.2. He didnít disclose his feeligs.
    2.3. He didnít show his feelings.

    3.1. The truth was revealed quite be accident.
    3.2. The truth was disclosed quite by accident.
    3.3. The truth was unveiled quite by accident.

    Thank you for your efforts.

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    Default Re: paraphrasing of three sentences

    The sentences in each group all mean about the same thing. Context might mean make a difference.








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    Default Re: paraphrasing of three sentences

    Hi RonBee,

    Thank you for your eloquent reply.

    Regards.

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    Default Re: paraphrasing of three sentences

    2.2. He didn’t disclose his feelings.

    Can 'disclose' be used in this context, teachers?

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    Default Re: paraphrasing of three sentences

    I'm not a teacher

    The closer the analyst can match his or her feelings to something the ....
    and the less need there is for the analyst to disclose his or her feelings. ...

    As for the issue of whether the therapist should disclose his countertransferences
    feelings, there is a conservative, moderate, and radical perspective. ...

    ..which he does not disclose his sexual orientation (for what may be .... revealing any
    expression of desire or feeling for his patient, whatsoev- ..

    In this light, the analyst's disclosure of his or her feelings is really a
    process-disclosure, an exploration of his or her own way of experiencing the ...

    Regards.

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    Default Re: paraphrasing of three sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by tedtmc View Post
    2.2. He didnít disclose his feelings.

    Can 'disclose' be used in this context, teachers?
    Absolutely!


    (What was intended was, "Context might make a difference.")

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