Today, I receiced a private message from one of the members of this forum, asking for help. As I'm not used to this kind of writing, I don't think I can really help him/her.It should be proofread by native speakers, so I decided to start this thread for him/her. The message is as follows :
Please help me to write an excellent job offer for one of my students .
To Whom It May Concern:
The purpose of this letter is to recommend Mr. XXX son of XXX, holder of ID Card No. XXX, for employment as a Computer Specialist or related position in Computer Department. He is planning to pursue a career in the field of computer now. This offer is contingent upon his successful education from American Universities, our receipt of his grades, and any other contingencies he may wish to state. With consideration to the need of this institute in the field of computer, we trust that his knowledge, skills and experience will be among our most valuable assets. He proved his talents in our English Department since 13 August, 2007 when he had started from basic level of English classes. He continued our ESL programs and had finished in 9 March, 2008.
I look forward to his arrival at our Institute and am confident that he will play a key role in our.
Dean of XXX Vocational Institution
When I've got the response, I'll let him/her know about it.
Thank you in advance.