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    Angry Could you help me this short essay? Process

    This is my short essay with the topic: How paper is manufactured
    Could you check it? Thanks so much


    Paper is one of the most important materials in the world and these days

    paper technology producing is developing. This report will describe how

    paper is manufactured.

    Firstly, the process starts with the tree after felling the tree is finished,

    logs are stacked by the machine.Subsequently, after transporting logs to

    the mill is over, logs are unloaded at the mill. Thirdly, before bleaching

    the pulp, the log is reduced to wood chips, the next step is added

    water.After this mixture is called '" pulp ". The pulp is beaten and added

    glue and resin together. At the same time, after mixture passing through

    wire screens is over, water is removed by the machine then paper is dried

    and glazed.Finally, after cutting to the correct size, paper is going to be

    sold.

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    Default Re: Could you help me this short essay? Process

    Quote Originally Posted by kid101 View Post
    This is my short essay with the topic: How paper is manufactured
    Could you check it? Thanks so much


    Paper is one of the most important materials in the world and these days

    paper technology producing [omit]is developing. This report will describe how

    paper is manufactured.

    Firstly, the process starts with the tree. After felling the tree is finished, [After the tree is felled]

    logs are stacked by machine.Subsequently, after transporting logs to

    the mill is over, logs are unloaded at the mill. Thirdly, before bleaching

    the pulp, the log is reduced to wood chips. The next step is the addition of

    water. This mixture is called '"pulp". The pulp is beaten and glue and resin added to it . The resulting mixture is passed over wire screens, the water is removed and then the paper is dried

    and glazed. Finally, after cutting to the correct size, paper is going to be

    sold.

    You mention that bleaching is to be done, but do not say when it is done.

    Most paper produced by this method will be sold by the roll.

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