I was standing in the courtyard. My brother with his full force pulled me backwards.As I was not ready to give up I used my full force to push myself to the front..Unfortunately I couldn’t balance, my legs got/were slipped and fell down smashing my face against the ground.My face was bleeding.They rushed me to the hospital and I got eight stitches in my forehead.My parents beat my brother for his deed.I felt sorry for him and felt that it was his offday.
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I was standing, impatiently, in the courtyard. My brother, with all his power, pulled me back, but I was not ready to give up. I used everything I had to force myself to the front, though unfortunately, I couldn't balance. My legs slipped and I fell down - smashing my face against the hard ground. My face was bleeding and I was rushed to the hospital where I received eight stiches in my forehead. My parents beat my brother for his misdeed, yet I felt sorry for him. It was not one of his best days.
Maybe I have changed it too much?
Is it correct to say
He was standing in front of me.
He was standing back of me
Both sentences are same right?
If he was behind,and there were two persons standing between us how to say it?
Even though he was standing behind me,there were two persons in between. is it right?
It was not his day. (It was an unpleasant/unlucky day for him)It was not one of his best days.
It was one of his bad days.