Hello, I have some questions concerning this letter. Especially the sentences in bold type. I hope you can give me better suggestions.
Dear Mr V.
Your enquiry for watersports equipment
Thank you for your interest in our products.
We regret that the particular paddles in which you were interested are no longer available, as they were part of our 2004 catalogue. However, we now carry a new range of paddles--The Crusoes--which reflect recent improvements in material, design and weight.
The Crusoe paddles are heavily in demand and especially popular with children. The Crusoe Winner, for example, is easy to handle and can be used for touring, canoeing and kayaking. It has a fibreglass paddle blade and is strong (or: sturdy) but still very light-weight. The Crusoe Champ is similar to the Crusoe Winner but it is suitable for younger children. It has a smaller fibreglass paddle blade.
Both paddles are of excellent quality but are still favourable. (What do you mean by 'favorable'? 'Affordable'/'reasonably priced'?)
For your information, we are sending you (by separate post) our latest catalogue with our current price list, terms of payment and delivery. Deliveries can be made from stock, subject to availability.
For further information, please visit our website at www.wasserwet.com.
Again, thank you for your interest in our products. We look forward to doing business with you.
- For Teachers