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    Business Letter - Vessel schedule

    Thanks for your follow up. There is a little bit delay as the original planned. The vessel will be arrived HKG on 15 June and ready to pick up on about 17 June.
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    Re: please corrrect me

    Please make sure to change (or delete) the information in the [ ]!



    Thank you for the follow up response [or question]. There is a bit of a delay from the original plan. The vessel will arrive at HKG [if HKG is a place] on June 15th, and the ___________ [the item to be picked up] will be ready for pick up on June 17th. Thank you.



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    Re: please corrrect me

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Thanks for your follow up. There is a little bit delay as the original planned. The vessel will be arrived HKG on 15 June and ready to pick up on about 17 June.
    Thanks for your follow up.There is a change in the original plan./The vessel is not arriving as we have planned .The vessel arrives/will arrive at HKG on June 15 and the items will be ready for loading on June 17.Thank you.

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    Re: please corrrect me

    Try:
    Thank you for your follow up on _______. There has been a slight delay of the shipment of ________. It will arrive one or two days later than previously planned. The vessel (ship?) will arrive at HKG on June 15 and will be ready for loading on June 17.
    Why will it take two days to prepare it for loading?



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    Re: please corrrect me

    Hi RonBee,

    Why will it take two days to prepare it for loading?

    Actually it should read : ...... will be ready for pick up on June

    Thank you for your help

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    Re: please corrrect me

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Hi RonBee,

    Why will it take two days to prepare it for loading?

    Actually it should read : ...... will be ready for pick up on June

    Thank you for your help
    Then (as in Takezo's post):
    The ___________ (the item to be picked up) will be ready for pick up on June 17th.
    I can't tell from your original post what the reason for the delay is.





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