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    Please Help! New to site; Resume Evaluation

    Hey Guys, so it is my first time posting here. It's a really great site to gain constructive criticism from and this is why I have joined.

    I would really appreciate if anyone could skim through or do a thorough examination of this 'entry' level resume for my upcoming new job with some financial service firm...I forget it's company name hahah.


    my objective is a bit unclear as of now...so I'm laying that aside. as for everything else, I would really love some reviews and whatnot. Thanks again:

    (for privacy purposes, addresses, names, and phone numbers will not be fully displayed)

    Objective

    nada

    Education
    Bellarmine College Preparatory, 2004—2006
    William C. Overfelt High, HS Diploma, 2006—2007
    Foothill College, 2007—current

    Awards

    Rotary International R&D award
    - won award based on excellent creativity and developer of marketed product(s)—2007

    Work Experience


    Santa Clara Paintball
    2006—Present
    · Professional referee and technician. Responsible for sanctioning games and upholding them to a fair, fun, and safe standard.
    · Assigned as the park’s field maintenance manager. Ensure customer satisfaction and enjoyment by creating a new playing field on weekly basis. Also deals with field’s appearance, such as keeping them as sanitary as possible.
    · Marker (gun) specialist. Manages and resolves any technical difficulties customers may have.

    NPPL (National Professional Paintball League)
    2008—Present
    · Certified Professional referee. Certified to officiate sanctioned NPPL Events.
    · Responsible for safety, positioning rules, making decisive calls, paintball equipment and general guidelines at national events.

    Lolita-Kisama
    2008—Present
    · Sales representative.

    Northside Theatre Company
    2007—2008
    · Sound and lighting technician. Responsible for transitioning lights and sound at appropriate time during a play.
    · Manages and computates technical aspects of sound and light software and or programs.




    Abercrombie and Fitch
    2007—2008
    · Customer Service relations.


    References

    - XXXX, Account Manager, Applied Global Services, (408).XXXXXX
    - XXXXX, Owner of Lokisa, Lolita-Kosima Clothing Inc., (408).XXXXXXX


    Languages

    English, Semi-Fluent Vietnamese, 3 years of Spanish, 1 year of Japanese.

    Interests and Activities

    Coaching a regional tournament bound paintball team.

    Hobbies

    Paintball; Badminton; Working with cars; Social Networking

    Computer Skills

    Microsoft Office 2000-2007, Excel, Power Point, Publisher, HTML internet; FireFox 2.0.0.14

    Licenses and Certificates

    NPPL Professional Referee Organization (P.R.O.) Certificate.

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    Re: Please Help! New to site; Resume Evaluation

    Quote Originally Posted by shocker85 View Post
    Hey Guys, so it is my first time posting here. It's a really great site to gain constructive criticism from and this is why I have joined.

    I would really appreciate if anyone could skim through or do a thorough examination of this 'entry' level resume for my upcoming new job with some financial service firm...I forget it's company name hahah.


    my objective is a bit unclear as of now...so I'm laying that aside. As for everything else, I would really love some reviews and whatnot. Thanks again:

    (For privacy purposes, addresses, names, and phone numbers will not be fully displayed)

    Objective

    nada

    Education
    Bellarmine College Preparatory, 2004—2006
    William C. Overfelt High, HS Diploma, 2006—2007
    Foothill College, 2007—current

    Awards

    Rotary International R&D award
    - won award based on excellent creativity and developer of marketed product(s)—2007

    Work Experience


    Santa Clara Paintball
    2006—Present
    · Professional referee and technician. Responsible for sanctioning games and upholding them to a fair, fun, and safe standard.
    · Assigned as the park’s field maintenance manager. Ensure customer satisfaction and enjoyment by creating a new playing field on a weekly basis. Also deals with field’s appearance, such as keeping it as sanitary as possible.
    · Marker (gun) specialist. Manages and resolves any technical difficulties customers may have.

    NPPL (National Professional Paintball League)
    2008—Present
    · Certified Professional referee. Certified to officiate sanctioned NPPL Events.
    · Responsible for safety, positioning rules, making decisive calls, paintball equipment and general guidelines at national events.

    Lolita-Kisama
    2008—Present
    · Sales representative.

    Northside Theatre Company
    2007—2008
    · Sound and lighting technician. Responsible for transitioning lights and sound at appropriate time during a play.
    · Manages and computates technical aspects of sound and light software and or programs.




    Abercrombie and Fitch
    2007—2008
    · Customer Service relations.


    References

    - XXXX, Account Manager, Applied Global Services, (408).XXXXXX
    - XXXXX, Owner of Lokisa, Lolita-Kosima Clothing Inc., (408).XXXXXXX


    Languages

    English, Semi-Fluent Vietnamese, 3 years of Spanish, 1 year of Japanese.

    Interests and Activities

    Coaching a regional tournament bound paintball team.

    Hobbies

    Paintball; Badminton; Working with cars; Social Networking

    Computer Skills

    Microsoft Office 2000-2007, Excel, Power Point, Publisher, HTML internet; FireFox 2.0.0.14

    Licenses and Certificates

    NPPL Professional Referee Organization (P.R.O.) Certificate.
    Looks good to me.

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