.the following is he script for tv ad for energy health drink, its my assigment please correct my language and help me to re write wherever i am wrong. Please help me as i need to submit it
Scene starts with a man on the corner of the road is busy fixing his car, glued inside the carís engine. Then a man passes like a shooting star (running very fast), and he takes his head out to see what is it was. He sees that policemen and police dogs are chasing the man, but the manís speed is greater than everyone's.
Man with a suprised look on his face waits for a while, gazing after them, scratching his cheek gently; he then goes to the rear seat of his car, opens a Glocone D drinks it, comes away from the car, stands in the middle of the road in the running pose, rubs his right foot on the road which emits smoke. (every effect will be animated here). Then he launches himself, starting to run, getting faster and faster until his legs resemble wheels rotating at a very great speed. He runs after the group of policemen at much greater speed, on the way from wherever he passes, the leafs on the street and the trees near by feels the wind like effect.and as he runs past the trees in the street, their leaves whip in the wind. Now he is closing in on the group of policemen until ZIP ZAP he passes them in a second. He is running so fast that he even passes the man being chased.
Once he realizes that, he stops suddenly [background sound of emergency brakes], turns back and get hold of the thief who is very surprised by the speed at which he was running. Now, the police dog running behind also stops suddenly, with a surprised look. All the policemen are so exhausted running that they just fall flat on the ground.
Man hands over the thief to police and goes back to his car. Over the screen comes the name of the drink.