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    Lavishness curdling you, and Luxury swirling around you, is the sign that success salutes you. Soak up undisturbed calm in this unique environment.

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    Lavishness curdling you and luxury swirling around you are signs that success salutes you. Soak up undisturbed calm in this unique environment.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Soup View Post
    Lavishness curdling you and luxury swirling around you are signs that success salutes you. Soak up undisturbed calm in this unique environment.
    Lavishness and luxury swirling around you are signs that success salutes you. Soak up undisturbed calm in this unique environment

    how is it now?

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    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Lavishness and luxury swirling around you are signs that success salutes you. Soak up undisturbed calm in this unique environment

    how is it now?
    Better. What about adding living,or something along those lines here?
    ... in this unique living environment.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Soup View Post
    Better. What about adding living,or something along those lines here?
    ... in this unique living environment.
    that's beautiful it gives a elegant touch to sentence now thanks a lot

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    You're most welcome.

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    You're most welcome.
    just help me out with the heading how about the following

    'Loss extra pounds instantly right now '

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    Lose extra pounds instantly right now

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    Quote Originally Posted by Soup View Post
    Lose extra pounds instantly right now
    Kindly help me with proofreading my other post

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    People are going to relax and lose weight at the same time?



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