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    Default kinldy check for grammar errors if any?

    For the delicate parts like skin, we have a special technology to work on them gently and give you the best results. Bipor Radio Frequency with Diode Lasser is a clinically proven, US-FDA approved treatment. it heats deep collagen fibres in the skin and underlying tissues, thereby resorting skin's lost tonicity texture

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    For skin, we have a special technology that works gently to give you the best results. Bipor Radio Frequency with Diode Lasser is a clinically proven US-FDA approved treatment that restores the skin's elasticity by applying heat to collagen fibres deep in the underlying tissue.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Soup View Post

    For skin, we have a special technology that works gently to give you the best results. Bipor Radio Frequency with Diode Lasser is a clinically proven US-FDA approved treatment that restores the skin's elasticity by applying heat to collagen fibres deep in the underlying tissue.
    Thanks a lot for your valauble time and kind help

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