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    Default Is there any other way to write it?

    A better home built with world’s renowned mivan technology in your budget

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    your dream home within your budget with the world's renowned Mivan technology.

    Please help me to re write this sentence
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    Default Re: Is there any other way to write it?

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    A better home built with world’s renowned mivan technology in your budget

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    your dream home within your budget with the world's renowned Mivan technology.

    Please help me to re write this sentence
    Those are not complete sentences. Did you mean to write a sentence or just an advertising slogan?
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    Indeed it's just advertising slogan to be specific it's just an headline title of the brochure

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    Default Re: Is there any other way to write it?

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    A better home built with world’s renowned mivan technology in your budget

    or

    your dream home within your budget with the world's renowned Mivan technology.

    Please help me to re write this sentence
    I see. Then something like....

    a great home built with world-renowned mivan technology, and within your budget

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    your dream home within your budget with world-renowned mivan techn ology

    Should mivan be capitalized?

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    Default Re: Is there any other way to write it?

    Quote Originally Posted by 2006 View Post
    I see. Then something like....

    a great home built with world-renowned mivan technology, and within your budget

    or

    your dream home within your budget with world-renowned mivan techn ology

    Should mivan be capitalized?
    yes Mivan has to be capitalized as it is proper noun.

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