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    ritamedeiros is offline Newbie
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    Default Grammar mistake

    Would you mind to correct my grammar or whatever mistake my letter has?

    Dear Mrs. ......

    As I mentioned on the interview I am writing to you to request three weeks leave. See my Annual Leave Form Request attached.

    I have important family matters to
    deal with and I need to return home for these three weeks. I hope you will understand my situation and grant me this leave.


    I am aware of my entitlement leave for the period from June 2008 to March 2009.

    I
    will be most grateful.

    Kind regards



    Rita Medeiros

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    Default Re: Grammar mistake

    Would you mind correcting my grammar or whatever mistakes my letter has?

    Dear Mrs. ......

    As I mentioned in the interview, I am writing to you to request (or: I wish to request/I would like to request) three weeks' leave. I have important family matters to deal with and I need to return home for these three weeks. I hope you will understand my situation and grant me this leave.

    I am aware of my entitlement leave for the period from June 2008 to March 2009.
    Please find attached my Annual Leave Form Request. (or: I am attaching my Annual Leave Form Request.)
    Thank you in advance for your consideration of my request.

    Kind regards



    Rita Medeiros

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