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    Default Please correct the following letter

    This has reference to the letter (dated 19.06.2008) received at my residence in Bangalore.
    As you may be aware, I have been working in xxxxx since long time, so you must be know that my local address in XXXX , and also note that the statement of accounts, reminder of payment and acknowledgements are being received through this address from your side since I have joined your mutual fund
    I donít understand why you have sent this cheque to my residence in Bangalore. However, please send this cheque to my present residence address in XXXXX
    You may kindly note that all correspondences in future have to be communicated on below mentioned address unless you have informed from my side.
    Thank you for your propmt attention to this matter

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    Default Re: Please correct the following letter

    Quote Originally Posted by Annecy View Post
    This is in reference to the letter (dated 19.06.2008) received at my residence in Bangalore.

    As you may be aware, I have been working in xxxxx since________(give a date or month/year), so you likely know my local address XXXX .

    Please note that all account statements, payment reminders and acknowledgements from your side, have been received at this address, since I joined your mutual fund.

    I do not understand why then, I have recieved a cheque at my residence in Bangalore.

    In any case, please send this cheque to my present residence XXXXX

    Please note that all future correspondence will be done with the address above, unless previously arranged with me.

    Thank you for your propmt attention to this matter

    I have corrected your letter as best I can, without knowing the specific details of what is going on. It is obvious that it is a serious matter (funds, letters, and incorrect addresses).

    I hope that help you.

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    Last edited by English-coach; 25-Jan-2009 at 12:50. Reason: removing extra link

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    Default Re: Please correct the following letter

    Quote Originally Posted by English-coach View Post
    I have corrected your letter as best I can, without knowing the specific details of what is going on. It is obvious that it is a serious matter (funds, letters, and incorrect addresses).

    I hope that help you. If you would like some more help with your writing visit my writing workshop at Kids learn English by Playing, so how can you get them to play in English? There you will be able to read real letter written by Arturo, which you can correct and then compare with my corrections. A great way to learn from someone else's mistakes.

    Have a great day!
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    That seems a lot like advertising.

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    Default Re: Please correct the following letter

    Quote Originally Posted by Annecy View Post
    This has reference to the letter (dated 19.06.2008) received at my residence in Bangalore.
    As you may be aware, I have been working in xxxxx since [state specific date], so you must be aware that my local address in XXXX, and also note that statements of account, reminders of payment and acknowledgements have been received at this address from you since I joined your mutual fund
    I don’t understand why you sent this cheque to my residence in Bangalore. However, please send cheques in the future to my present residence address in XXXXX
    You may kindly note that all correspondence in the future should be sent to the above mentioned address unless I notify you of a change.

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    Default Re: Please correct the following letter

    Sorry about that RonBee. I deleted it.

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