I have spotted some mistakes from your essay.Although it is great and impressive.
I would like to say well done friend and keep imporving your writing.
Have a nice time and take care
much more worthed than it.
much more worth than eduction.
who believe that by giving dood eduction.
who believe in giving a good eduction.
answer on this case and both agruements
answer to this case and both eduction and experience.
answer of success.
answer to success
the key to be succeed.
the key to be successful or the key to succeed in.
gain the mistake and learn the past.
correct the mistakes and learn from the past.
If will definetely help
It will definitely help