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  1. Prakinator
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    I need help in deciding the key supports of my thesis

    Hi ppl I need your help. I am writing an essay about cross-border and online prescription drugs trade. My position in my thesis statement is this trade being beneficial to all the players of it. I have also racked up some research notes on the topic from statistics and opinions that supports both sides found in newspaper and magazine articles. However, I am having trouble deciding which key points I should point out in my essay. Please give me some feedbacks! Thank you.

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    Without knowing which points you wish to make, it is hard to prioritise them.

  2. Prakinator
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    Can anyone please suggest more key points so that I can categorize my notes? Here are the key points that I've identified:

    against cross-border prescription drug trade: shortages, safety
    support cross-border prescription drug trade: rising drug prices, employment opportunities, tax dollars generation, ensured safety
    neutral stuff: price facts and its flow chart, interests of all the players, Statistics Canada stats, public policy of price control


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    Quote Originally Posted by Prakinator
    Can anyone please suggest more key points so that I can categorize my notes? Here are the key points that I've identified:

    against cross-border prescription drug trade: shortages, safety
    support cross-border prescription drug trade: rising drug prices, employment opportunities, tax dollars generation, ensured safety
    neutral stuff: price facts and its flow chart, interests of all the players, Statistics Canada stats, public policy of price control
    You may want to do your homeowork in detail.

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