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    is this sentence correct

    Please find the attached report for your perusal. I had moved some data for the order had 'canceled' and 'shipped' in the next page, in order for your easy read the report

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    Exclamation Re: is this sentence correct

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Please find the attached report for your perusal. I had moved some data relating to (for) the order as (had) 'canceled' and 'shipped' to (in) the next page, (in order) for your easy reading of the report
    Delete the words in brackets.


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    Re: is this sentence correct

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Please find the attached report for your perusal. I have moved some data for the order had 'canceled' and 'shipped' in about those orders that were "cancelled" or "shipped" onto the next page, in order for your easy read the report to make the report easier to read.
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