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    navi tasan is offline Key Member
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    Default ellipsis

    Can one say:
    1-Those destroyed palaces were the ruins we had heard about, like ghosts.
    instead of:
    2-Those destroyed palaces were the ruins we had heard about, which were like ghosts.


    Can one say:
    3-Those destroyed palaces were the ruins we had heard about, like ghosts from the past.
    instead of:
    4-Those destroyed palaces were the ruins we had heard about, which were like ghosts from the past.


    Can one say:
    5-Those destroyed palaces were the ruins we had heard about, like ghosts in a void awating their resurrection.
    instead of:
    6-Those destroyed palaces were the ruins we had heard about, which were like ghosts in a void awating their resurrection.

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    Default Re: ellipsis

    It would perhaps be clearer if you structure the sentence like this:

    Those destroyed palaces were the ghostlike ruins we had heard about.

    I'm not a teacher.

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    Default Re: ellipsis

    Those destroyed palaces, which looked like ghosts, were the ruins we had heard about.

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