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    Default A peaceful morning

    I woke up in the morning at 5:30AM.
    It was such a peaceful morning that everything was slow and quiet.
    You must want to know why Lan have to wake up so early ?
    Because I have an appointment with my friends in the swimming pool today.
    Last night Franky and Lisa invited me to go to swimming pool together at 6AM .
    I said I 'd like to go but "depends on the situation" .I don't think I could wake up so early!!
    I am lazy Lan.

    And guess what?
    I just woke up after I heard the alarm .
    It seems like my body really want to go swimming and I must wake up .
    We started to swimming at about 6:30.The pool was a indoor pool and the water was clean.

    After the long distance swimming (about 1000 meter),both of us were really tired.
    Then we took a shower ,heading to Mcdonalds to had the breakfasts.

    It's a good begining of the summer vacation.

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    Default re: A peaceful morning

    Quote Originally Posted by red55C View Post
    I woke up in the morning at 5:30AM.

    (You could say: "I woke up in the morning at 5:30.")
    Quote Originally Posted by red55C View Post
    It was such a peaceful morning that everything was slow and quiet.
    It was a peaceful morning. Everything was slow and quiet.
    The original sentence suggests that it was slow and quiet because it was a peaceful morning. (Cause and effect.)
    Quote Originally Posted by red55C View Post
    You must want to know why Lan have to wake up so early ?
    You might want to know why I had to wake up so early.
    Don't space before end marks (periods, question marks, exclamation marks).
    Quote Originally Posted by red55C View Post
    Because I have an appointment with my friends in the swimming pool today.
    I promised my friends I would meet them at the swimming pool today.
    Quote Originally Posted by red55C View Post
    Last night Franky and Lisa invited me to go to swimming pool together at 6AM .
    I said I 'd like to go but "depends on the situation" .I don't think I could wake up so early!!
    I am lazy Lan.
    Last night Frankie and Lisa asked me if I would meet them at the swimming pool today at 6AM. I said I'd like to go, but I didn't think I could wake up so early. I am lazy Lan.
    Quote Originally Posted by red55C View Post
    And guess what?
    I just woke up after I heard the alarm .
    It seems like my body really want to go swimming and I must wake up .
    We started to swimming at about 6:30.The pool was a indoor pool and the water was clean.
    And guess what? I woke up right after I heard the alarm. We started swimming at about 6:30. The pool is an indoor pool, and the water was clean.
    Quote Originally Posted by red55C View Post
    After the long distance swimming (about 1000 meter),both of us were really tired.
    Then we took a shower ,heading to Mcdonalds to had the breakfasts.

    It's a good begining of the summer vacation.
    After a really good workout (swimming about 1000 meters), both of us were really tired. We took a shower then headed to McDonalds for breakfast.

    It was a good beginning to summer vacation.

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    Default Re: A peaceful morning

    both of us were really tired....
    I think there were three of you


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    Default Re: A peaceful morning

    Quote Originally Posted by curmudgeon View Post
    both of us were really tired....
    I think there were three of you
    Good point! It should be All of us were really tired. Unless, of course, only two of them went swimming.


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