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    zaed_salah is offline Junior Member
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    Need help in my personal profile

    Hello everyone.

    I wrote this personal profile in my CV, I think is too simple, please help me to make it more attractive:
    Personal Profile
    Simple person, easy to deal with, a competent working in a team as I was a scout from early age, very ambitious, motivated. I strongly believe in my potential, my ability; and hard worker as long as interesting and challenging. I am open minded to other cultures and people from different places, accept and respect other opinions and believes, love to learn more foreign languages.

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    Tenor is offline Newbie
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    Re: Need help in my personal profile

    CV is more a list of everything you have achieved. And I always think these general descriptions will not give you too many credits. In addition, the reviewer may not be patient enough to read such long sentence.
    I suggest you to put something more characteristic, or one short sentence which may impress the reviewer most.

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Re: Need help in my personal profile

    Have a look here at how CVs should appear: CVs And Resumes - ESL Web Directory - UsingEnglish.com

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