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    The headlines below need to be edited:

    10 major complaints targeting tourist industry

    10 major complaints on tourist industry

    4000+ corrupted officials fled overseas, Hannan suffers most

    Over 4000 corrupted officials fled overseas, Hannan being the major source

    Hannan being the major source, over 4000 corrupted officials fled overseas

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    10 major complaints made against tourist industry

    Over 4000 corrupt officials flee overseas- Hannan suffers most


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