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    Default no two objects so dissimilar that he cannot fit them into a relationship

    Have a look at (1). You might want to change "; " into "(,) with" or insert "being" in between "objects" and "so," but let's leave it out of consideration here.

    (1) His mind finds categories everywhere; no two objects so dissimilar that he cannot fit them into a relationship.
    (D. Watt, Literary Criticism)

    In my understanding, (2) adequately explains what the original phrase (or small clause) in (1) means.

    (2) he can fit all objects into a relationship, no matter how dissimilar they may be

    Do you agree?

    Also, any stylistic suggestions will be appreciated.
    Thank you in advance
    Seiichi MYOGA

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    Default Re: no two objects so dissimilar that he cannot fit them into a relationship

    (1) His mind finds categories everywhere; no two objects so dissimilar that he cannot fit them into a relationship.
    (D. Watt, Literary Criticism)
    (2) he can fit all objects into a relationship, no matter how dissimilar they may be

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    Default Re: no two objects so dissimilar that he cannot fit them into a relationship

    Dear Soup,

    I appreciate your help and comments.

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