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    This is Kishor one of your client who are trying to go to Malaysia at Samentec Johar for the post of Computer operator. I have applied for this post nearly 1 month ago. But, till today; I could not get any conformation/informatiom from you. So, when I aspect your kindly information about my VISA.

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    Quote Originally Posted by roshik View Post
    This is Kishor one of your client who is now ready to go to Malaysia at Samentec Johar for the post of Computer operator. I have applied for this post nearly a month ago. Unfortunately, I have not been favoured with any response/informatiom from you till today. I shall be grateful for an early communication along with information about my VISA.
    You can try with the correction made.

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    Quote Originally Posted by roshik View Post
    This is Kishor one of your client who are trying to go to Malaysia at Samentec Johar for the post of Computer operator. I have applied for this post nearly 1 month ago. But, till today; I could not get any conformation/informatiom from you. So, when I aspect your kindly information about my VISA.
    Try:
    This is Kishor. I am one of your clients, and I wish to go to Malaysia at Samentec Johar to take on the post of computer operator. I applied for that job nearly a month ago, but I have yet to hear from you. Please let me know as soon as possible about the status of my visa application.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
    Try:
    This is Kishor. I am one of your clients, and I wish to go to Malaysia at Samentec Johar to take on the post of computer operator. I applied for that job nearly a month ago, but I have yet to hear from you. Please let me know as soon as possible about the status of my visa application.
    Here is my suggestion.

    My name is Kishor and I am one of your clients. I would like to go to Malaysia, Samentec Johar to assume the post of Computer Operator. I applied for the position a month ago and would like to know if you have recieved it and the status of my visa application.

    Best regards,
    Kishor ___________

    Letter writing can be difficult...especially when you are writing a formal letter. Your original letter sounds a bit negative when you say that you applied a month ago and haven't heard from them yet. Try to keep everything positive.

    I hope that helps you.

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    Last edited by English-coach; 25-Jan-2009 at 12:54.

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    Default Re: This is letter to a reputable company

    Quote Originally Posted by English-coach View Post
    My name is Kishor and I am one of your clients. I would like to go to Malaysia, Samentec Johar to assume the post of Computer Operator. I applied for the position a month ago and would like to know if you have received my job application. I would also like to know the status of my visa application.

    Best regards,
    Kishor ___________
    What do you think, roshik? Is that what you meant to say?

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