Could you please proofread these sentences for me:
1. The culprit of the assassination is Mr.Henri,father thereof was also a criminal.There goes the saying 'like father like son'.
2. " can't you remember the name of the person whom you danced with at the ball?" asked Perdita.
3. Please tell me the name of the girl whom I'll be living with.
4. Could you provide some information about the people with whom I'll be staying.
Do you know where I can learn more about the usage of 'whom'?
kindly thank you for your answer(s)!
p/s: is it possible to add 'kindly'?