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    Talking please correct grammars and style

    please edit my humble essay....

    topic: some university require studetns to take classes in many subjects. other university require students to specialize in one subject.
    pick one idea and explain why you choose that with using example.

    essay:
    I agree with the idea that the students need to take classes in many subjects in university. Of course, it can be good for students to specialize in one subject. The students can more concentrate on one subject rather than students who are covering a lot of subjects, and they are likely to be a specialist in their own major. To survive in real life, however, students need to know various subjects. By taking various classes, students can experience a variety of part in the world and expand their knowledge, background, and view point. And it could be also helpful when they do their subject. For example, when covering the medical sue, if a lawyer has knowledge about medical, it would be helpful to win the game. Or by studying more about medical, the lawyer can be a specialized lawyer who only cover medical problems, and it makes him famous in his job. It is true that covering several subjects takes much time and hard work than one subject, but hard works will cause a good result in your future for sure.

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    Re: please correct grammars and style

    Say:
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    I agree with the idea that students need to take classes in many subjects....
    By taking various classes, students can expand their knowledge
    How many times have you rewritten that?


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