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    #1

    is this text ok?

    The company has branches/facilities throughout the country and holds the monopoly of the delivery of small mail, like letters.


    hi,
    is this sentence fine, please?
    thanks.
    Last edited by jctgf; 12-Jul-2008 at 04:03.

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    #2

    Re: is this text ok?

    The company has branches/facilities throughout the country and holds the monopoly of the delivery of small mail, like letters.

    Then sentence is fine
    You could also use: monopolises - holds the monopoly of

    not a teacher

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