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    rafaelxx is offline Junior Member
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    Please could you correct this text.

    Dear Teacher,

    Please could you correct this text.
    "The Ministry of the Interior announced an application for subsidy of school-building. The award could be 90 percent of school-building’s cost. The local government took this opportunity and sent an application. The construction plans were made by Istvan Manyi, Ybl-prize winner architect, who was born in Hajdusamson and his partners. They were considering our vocational observations and conceptions as they made the building plans.
    We submitted to the Department of Education the conceptions of development which cost nearly one milliard and two hundred million forints."

    Thank you very much.

    rafael

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    Re: Please could you correct this text.

    Welcome to the forums.

    Quote Originally Posted by rafaelxx View Post
    Dear Teacher,

    Please could you correct this text.

    "The Ministry of the Interior announced it would now consider applications for subsidizing the building of schools. The award could be 90 per cent of the total cost.. The local government took this opportunity and sent in an application. The construction plans were made by Istvan Manyi, Ybl-prize winner architect who was born in Hajdusamson, and his partners. They were considered/took into consideration our vocational observations and conceptions as they designed the building.
    We submitted to the Department of Education the completed plans which, it is estimated, will cost nearly one milliard and two hundred million forints."

    Thank you very much.

    rafael
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    Re: Please could you correct this text.

    Dear Teacher,
    Thank you very much for your help.
    Can you help me with this text also?
    "At last the building works started in two timings. On 29th August 2000 the new school-year of 2000/2001 started with a school-year opening ceremony. The pupils of Hajdúsámson could already study in the new building and soon could use the new gym.

    In this time the new library was handed over in the attic of the new school. And with this an opportunity opened to develop a pedagogic department and

    The new school library was handed over in the attic of the new school. With this an opportunity opened not only to accommodate the children's book, but also form a pedagogic department. The standard of the information technology became suitable for the modern education thanks to the classroom of computer studies and the library.
    Much to the delight of all of us the new gym was handed over on 5th October 2002. Then the assembly hall was handed over so our programmes standard became higher. Now we can organize deservedly all of our school tradition and celebrations.
    This assembly hall is also used at several events like school events, nursery school events, gym programmes, convivial occasions, exhibitions. This assembly hall was made real saloon by András Galánfi, wood-carver and Péter Mátl sculptor artist who made a huge adorned wood-carving, which symbolize the seven tribe of the conquering Hungarians. This assembly hall cost nearly 10 million forints, could be accomplished with the supporting agreement of Gábor Hamza the mayor, and the local representatives. So the result of all this we can see these huge singly 10 meters wide and 12 meters high carving decorations made of lime tree on the frontage of our assembly hall.

    Our pupils can go for a walk, take a break and some fresh air in our school yard between the lessons in the forenoons. They can have a rest and have a chat on the garden-seats. We run day-care centre in the afternoons these children also enjoy our nice and clean quadrangle. We also organize special programmes there much to the delight of all of us on the student council’s day.

    Our institution provides canteen food to nearly 600 children within day-care and canteen catering. New dining hall branch was built which is not as crowded as it was previously. Altogether 160 children can have their meal in this healthy and hygienic atmosphere at the same time. Besides it can be used at other special events, programmes and meetings.

    This new stately school is surrounded more and more beautiful environment. The previous park is a nice service area for parents as much as their children.
    It was necessary to form a playground for the day-care children and the afternoon activities. There is a concrete school yard inside and a grassy school yard outside with playground and wood toys, where the children can play."

    Thank you so much.
    rafael

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