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    Please, dear teachers,

    Is this text OK?

    A mathematical model of a slurry membrane reactor used for syngas polymerization was developed to simulate and compare the maximum yields and operating conditions in the reactor with that in a conventional slurry reactor.

    Thank you very much.

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    A mathematical model of a slurry membrane reactor used for syngas polymerization was developed to simulate and compare the maximum yields and operating conditions in the reactor with that in a conventional slurry reactor.
    The sentence sounds pretty much okay.
    And this is ''Modeling of Fischer-Tropsch Synthesis with water permeable membrane'', no?

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    Quote Originally Posted by IvanV View Post
    And this is ''Modeling of Fischer-Tropsch Synthesis with water permeable membrane'', no?
    Yeah, how do you know?
    I thought it was not fine because it is too much similar to a word-for-word translation from Portuguese.
    Well, I can see now both languages are not that different from each other.

    Thank you for helping out!

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