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Nowadays when it comes to the questions about working in a team or independently,peoplemay often gives a diverse of answers based on their individual value systerms.Some believe that working in a group is better while others claim that indenpendently is more suitable . As for me ,my favor goes to the latter.
I'm not sure but I would write:
Nowadays when it comes to the questioning about wether working in a team or independently, people may often give diverese answers based on their individual value of systems.
To begin with,I concede that work in a group or a team serves as very improtant factors for the company's development.
To begin with, I concede that working in a group or a team serves as a very important factor for the company'sdevelopment.
Since ,team work makes all the people in this company to take care of the company's future ,and they do everything for the company,when they have some projects or some problems ,they always gether together ,having a meeting to discuss the way to do projects.Make their ideas together ,finding out the best way to deal with projects.
Teamwork makes all the colleagues in this company to take care of the company's future by, for example, gathering in a meeting and consolidating their ideas to discuss the accomplishment of their next project.
edit:Sorry that I cannot finish my idea of the correction but I am in a hurry. I will edit the rest when I am home again :)
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