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The incumbent will have to look for sales operation in the showroom direct interaction with the customer, rapport building, he/she will also be responsible to increase the sale by putting their best effort and using their convincing power and knowledge and motivating the sales team. Professionals with a minimum of four years experience inluxury ill be preferred. Pay package Rs. 450,000p.a + incentives
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The position requires the overseeing of sales operations in the showroom, as well as direct interaction and rapport with customers. The successful applicant will also be responsible for increasing sales and motivating the sales team. Professionals with a minimum of four years of sales in luxury goods will be preferred. Remuneration: Rs. 450,000 p.a. + bonus.