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By Xiang River one night, I with one classmate who is from Yi-Yang (a county in of China), walked to the bank of the river. .Afterwards ,he dived down into her(i.e. the river)with the sounds When we arrived/got there, he dived into it/the river making the sound "pu-tong". I said that I wore contact lenses and he said, "Oh ,it's better you not jump down that you don't jump in." After that, he crawled up the bank, and then we walked recklessly ,then returned aimlessly before going back to the college.