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    5-help me ,thank you( my life in university)

    5) The situation has all changed , and times brought great changes to the world . Here ,there was one small street full with various snacks/ light repast/ appetizers, and forgot that 1 brother from Xiang-Shan( one county of China) Middle School,if spare ,just went here to plan .Thus one kid from Guan-Cheng Middle School said to myself :" why are you so which are from key high school, so?"[ I put all after-hours on the videos.]




    I rectify some wrongs:
    The situation has changed , and times brought great changes to the world . Here ,there was one small street full with various snacks , and forgot that one brother from Xiang-Shan Middle School .
    If he was spare , he just went here to play .Thus one kid from Guan-Cheng Middle School said to myself :" why are you so ? You know you are from key high school?" I put all after-hours on the videos.
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    Re: 5-help me ,thank you( my life in university)

    The situation has changed? From what to what?




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    Re: 5-help me ,thank you( my life in university)

    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
    The situation has changed? From what to what?



    The small street full with various snacks disppeared.
    Of course, other changes happened in my campus.

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    Re: 5-help me ,thank you( my life in university)

    They are not wrongs. They are (possibly) mistakes. Or errors.

    Please post revisions in a separate posting.

    Perhaps:
    The street had small shops which sold snacks.

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    Re: 5-help me ,thank you( my life in university)

    Perhaps:
    Things have changed a great deal around here. There used to be a short street full of shops that sold snacks.

    A boy from Guang-Cheng Middle School said to me, "Why are you so?"
    Please space after punctuation marks (comma, period, colon, question mark, etc.) and not before.





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    Re: 5-help me ,thank you( my life in university)

    I think many Chinese students study English only for exams.But I love English, and want to use it to express my feelings and mood in University. Because my life is dull except the life in university.




    Finally, Mr. Ronbbe, I appreciate you VERY MUCH!

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    Re: 5-help me ,thank you( my life in university)

    Quote Originally Posted by dodonaomik View Post
    I think many Chinese students study English only for exams.But I love English, and want to use it to express my feelings and mood in University. Because my life is dull except the life in university.
    That is good. But you might want to change that last sentence so that it says more. (Make it more specific.) Perhaps:
    My life is dull except for the time I spend going to class and studying; other than that I don't do much.
    What do you think?





    Quote Originally Posted by dodonaomik View Post
    Finally, Mr. Ronbee, I appreciate you VERY MUCH!
    Quote Originally Posted by dodonaomik View Post
    Thank you!








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    Re: 5-help me ,thank you( my life in university)

    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post

    My life is dull except for the time I spend going to class and studying; other than that I don't do much.

    What do you think?
    Yeah. But the following usage is right? going to class and studying?


    "going to studying" is right? Today I see the usage first time. In China, all of my English teachers only told us to use "going to study".


    I'm totally puzzled now. Oh, my god!
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    Re: 5-help me ,thank you( my life in university)

    No. Not going to studying. Going to class and studying.


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