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    Please check these sentences..

    1. Don't be afraid to take the risk, or you won't be success.

    2. There are many people outsite there who needs our help.

    3. Give 1% of your happiness to those people who need it outside.

    4. Don't let your friends persuade your mind.

    5. Everything starts from zero.

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    Re: Please check these sentences..

    1. Don't be afraid to take (the) risk, or you won't be successful.

    2. There are many people outsite outside there who needs need our help.

    3. Give 1% of your happiness to those people who need it. (outside)

    4. Don't let your friends persuade your mind. influence you.

    5. Everything starts from zero.


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    Re: Please check these sentences..

    Thanks man.

    Btw, for the 1st one, can I say "Don't be afraid to take a risk"?

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    Re: Please check these sentences..

    Quote Originally Posted by jomo27 View Post
    Thanks man.

    Btw, for the 1st one, can I say "Don't be afraid to take a risk"?
    Yes! "Don't be afraid to take a risk!" is common usage.

    Cheers,
    Amigo

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    Re: Please check these sentences..

    Quote Originally Posted by amigos4 View Post
    Yes! "Don't be afraid to take a risk!" is common usage.

    Cheers,
    Amigo

    So.. If I put "Don't be afraid to take a risk, or you won't be successful" is fine?

    I still don't really understand of using 'a' and 'the'

    Please teach me.

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    #6

    Re: Please check these sentences..

    hello,
    NOte I'm not a teaacher,


    Quote Originally Posted by jomo27 View Post
    1. Don't be afraid to take the risk, or you won't be success.
    Another alternative :
    Don't be afreid to take a risk , or you won't succed.

    If you describe a risk ( previously in convrsation) then use the .
    If it is general statement then a.

    Cheers,

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