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    changeling is offline Newbie
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    Default writing about sports food

    Hi everybody!

    I’m writing an article about sports food. Could you, please, check if my sentence makes sense?

    In fact, sports food is concentrated natural foods that are technologically processed to remove ballast substances and other unnecessary components that could derail your sports diet.

    Thanks in advance

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    Default Re: writing about sports food

    In fact, sports food is concentrated natural foods (food, since you started with singular) that (are) is technologically processed to remove ballast(??) substances and other unnecessary components that could derail upset your sports diet.

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