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    Quote Originally Posted by Sam-F
    Gaaa, that sentence is even longer than the first!!!

    But at least now I think I understand what the original paragraph was trying to say...
    I wasn't trying to rewrite it. As a reader I was trying to show what it sounded/read like. :wink:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Red5
    Quote Originally Posted by Sam-F
    Gaaa, that sentence is even longer than the first!!!
    LOL!

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    Quote Originally Posted by NewHope
    Quote Originally Posted by Sam-F
    Gaaa, that sentence is even longer than the first!!!

    But at least now I think I understand what the original paragraph was trying to say...
    :D I laughed so hard that I almost could not hold my mouse.

    I think Casiopea's rewriting is very clear. But what you got is not the meaning that the original paragraph conveyed, because Casiopea was confused by the para!
    Was that your paragraph? Ooh, NewHope, don't laugh.

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    Hi Casiopea, take it easy. I know you're so kind and intelligent. I was just kidding. Thank you.

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    Oh no, that was not mny paragraph.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NewHope
    Oh no, that was not mny paragraph.
    Whew! That's good news. :D

    Could you tell us what it means, then? I'd like to know what the author was trying to say. 8)

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