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    Post I come back.

    Hey, guys!! I have not written the essays for a long time. If you ask me why,


    I will respond. I do not why. Recently, I have done a large amount of things.


    Let me spell out it.

    In the begging of this summer, My friend and I took a trip to Kenting for


    three days. This trip costs me 3000 or so but it was a memorable journey. I


    thought the most unforgettable part of the trip was we went to the beach. I


    liked the swells. It was back and forth and there were many strong breaches


    to strike me. It was so insane.


    When we ride the motorbike, we could smell the salty sea wind, enjoy the


    sense of the slight touch of the mild sea wind and accept the bright and hot


    shine. In a nutshell, the trip to Kenting is worth taking.


    Another thing is playing pool. How did I get into the billiards world. It


    stemmed from the fact that oneday I originally had a appointment with my


    student to play basketball, only to play pool on account of the intense heat.


    That was my second times to play. Undoubtedly, I was so poor at the skills


    and was laughed by my students. As a result of the thing, I am addicted to


    playing pool from that moment.


    Although it takes money to practice, I think it is not a big deal. I want to


    achieve some level that I can defeat my students. I take advantage of many


    ways, inclusive of watching the pooling games, go to the pool table,


    consulting my friends, and the like.


    I come to realize that this sport combine with physics, math, feelings, skills,


    and so forth. It is hard to reach the utmost level.

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    Please help me to correct it. thank you very much.
    Last edited by bid213; 04-Aug-2008 at 16:20.

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    Re: I come back.

    Quote Originally Posted by bid213 View Post
    In the begging of this summer, my friend and I took a trip to Kenting for


    three days. This trip cost me 3000 (what currency? Dollars $? GBP ?) or so but it was a memorable journey. I


    thought the most unforgettable part of the trip was when we went to the beach. I


    liked the swells (what are swells?). It was back and forth and there were many strong breaches


    to strike me. It was so insane.
    (this doesn't make sense)


    When we rode the motorbike, we could smell the sea breeze, enjoy its touch and appreciate the bright, hot sunshine.

    In a nutshell, the trip to Kenting was worth taking.



    Another fun thing was playing pool. How did I get into the billiards world, you ask? Well, one day when I had an appointment with my


    student to play basketball, we ended up playing pool on account of the intense heat.


    That was only the second time I had played. I was so poor at the game that I

    was laughed at by my students. As a result, I was addicted to



    playing pool from that moment on.


    Although it takes money to practice, I think it is not a big deal. I want to


    achieve some level of skill so that I can defeat my students. I learn by various methods, including: watching, playing,


    consulting my friends, etc.


    I came to realize that this sport combines physics, maths, emotions, skills,


    and many other things. It is hard to reach the highest level.
    .

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