Hi dear teachers. I wrote this small paragraph about my family. Could you check it please?
I'm living in a well-tied family. I've got four brothers and six sisters. I'm the oldest one. I usually spend part of my precious time with them because I'm busy learning English and other foreign languages. we are so close, we are cheek by jowl, especielly my brother Mohammad, I find my brother Mohammad a family man although he is pretty young to hold the fort. I have a very good relationship with my mother, she always helps me when I need her. My room is my universe, I love when I clean it up and when I invite my close friends in.