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    Paragraph correction

    Is the following paragraph correct

    I have a dog his name is Buster.He is brown and tan with a big white spot around his eye.He likes to jump on me when I come home from school.He especially likes the sound of the can opener and me yelling come and get it When he hears that he comes bounding towards me with his tongue hanging out and his big ears flopping up and down.He is a great dog!

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    Re: Paragraph correction

    I have a dog and his name is Buster. He is brown and tan with a big white spot around his eye. He likes to jump on me when I come home from school. He especially likes the sound of the can opener and me yelling come and get it. When he hears that he comes bounding towards me with his tongue hanging out and his big ears flopping up and down. He is a great dog!

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