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    Dear Mr Smith,
    I would like to apply for the position of sales assistant in the trade department in your company which advertised in the website of ‘www.firstjob.com.’.
    I feel I am well qualified for the position of sales assistant. I was a grade four student study in Shanghai University major in international economy and trade. I have enough knowledge about international export and import, and I have two months practice in such field in Bao Steel International Economic and Trade Inc. in the summer of 2004 which made me familiar with the business. I am an smart and enthusiastic person that can working with staff happily and compatibly.
    A position in your company give me the opportunity to work full-time in the career that I love, and to contribute myself to your company that I would like.
    A resume giving details of my qualifications and experience is attached.
    I would be happy to attend an interview at any time convenient to you.
    Your sincerely,
    Elia
    Here is my resume:


    ELIA TANG
    Room 501,#34,Waicuifeng Road,
    Shanghai ,China. 201907
    Home phone 56042581
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    Objective
    Executive assistant or sales assistant position in sales department in the multinational corporation

    Summary of Qualification
    Ÿ Interpersonal Communication skill
    Ÿ Planning and organization skills
    Ÿ Certificate IV in English Studies-SILC Program
    Ÿ Native Chinese speaker fluent in English speaking, reading, writing.
    Ÿ Computer literate: Microsoft office, Windows XP Professional, Flash, Dreamwever
    Ÿ Experience in teaching Mathematics, Chinese, English of middle school level
    Ÿ Intimate interpersonal relationship with classmates
    Ÿ Able to drive cars
    Ÿ College English Test of Band 6

    Education
    Sydney Institution of Language and Commerce(SILC), Shanghai University Shanghai, China
    Diploma of International Trade , June 2003
    Bachelor of International Economic and Trade, June 2005

    Experience
    Alps Electronical company Shanghai,China Worked as a assistant in Procurement Department in Alps Electronical company, helping ordering, arranging and filling in the material. In addition, worked in telephone service part of the company.

    Shanghai Baosteel International Economic&Trade Co.,Ltd Shanghai,China
    Worked as a business assistant in Trade Equipment&Engineering Department, dealing with import and export items.

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    Default Re: cover letter and resume,please help me to correct

    Welcome

    Resume and Cover Letter Examples: click here, and here, and here.

    All the best, :D

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    elia Guest

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    Dear Casiopea,
    Thank you for your help.
    I will correct the mistakes i made in my cover letter and resume.
    Your suggestion is helpful and useful for me.
    Thank you once more.
    Yours sincerely
    Elia

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    Ÿ Able to drive cars

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