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    #1

    Check and correct it

    Hi
    please help to correct this conversation.

    A :please buy those things that i listed in that supermarket.
    B :ok i will buy them.
    A : where are you now?
    B : i'm at car park now.
    A : what you doing at car park?
    B : you told me to go and buy things at supermarket so i came to car park to
    go to the supermarket.


    regards
    rayz


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    Re: Check and correct it

    Quote Originally Posted by rayz26 View Post
    Hi
    please help to correct this conversation.

    A: Please buy those things that I listed in that supermarket. Here is a list of things I want you to buy in the supermarket.
    B: Ok, I will go and buy them.

    A: Where are you now?
    B: I'm in the car park now.
    A: What you doing in the car park?
    B: You told me to go and buy things at the supermarket so I came to the car park to go to the supermarket.


    regards
    rayz
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