This is probably, the only episode in the entire session I would like to leave the wording as is. Maybe, it is a sort of proff. sleng (we are generally speaking in terms of complex solutions and not of single servers or programs).
Originally Posted by RonBee
I hope I don't make new mistakes in the simplified paragraphs:
In addition to a strategic thinking developing, the program provides especially useful managerial tools: Change Management, Project Management, Legal and Financial Issues in Information System Management. Others, like "Data Security and Privacy" may reorganize my existing knowledge and to present the issues from the different or wider point of view.
All this caused me to look for a program that will help to accomplish my knowledge and to get certified in order to advance my career in IT leadership. I believe, that the MSIT degree from the XYZ University completely answers the purpose.
I have to apologize, RonBee. I didn't realize how much efforts this proofreading may take! I know English at the reasonable level for tech. reading/writing, some e-mailing and so on.. (TOEFL=601\677). And I see after this session, that I probably have created some illusions for myself regarding my English. Thanks for your patience!