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    Quote Originally Posted by dezzamet View Post
    "In addition to developing strategic thinking, ..." - I've just copied as is.

    In the second sentence "answers the purpose" sounds better for me, but I probably don't feel the subtle differences between these alternatives. Do you think "achieves that goal" matches better? It already appears somewhere above in the text...
    Yes. Say "achieves that goal" if it has already happened, "would achieve that goal" if it is about the future.

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    OK, so the final version will sound like this:
    I believe that the MSIT degree from XYZ University would achieve that goal.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dezzamet View Post
    OK, so the final version will sound like this:
    I believe that the MSIT degree from XYZ University would achieve that goal.

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