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  1. #1
    budaniel Guest

    thank you for read and corrert my resume

    :D resume
    Daniel

    Address: Shanghai Xuanhua road 113 long 12 hao 405
    Phone number: 62252675
    Email-address: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead

    Objective:
    Seeking position of the assistant of market manager

    Summary of Qualification:
     Proficient whit VB, Word, Excel and PowerPoint.
     Has passed CET-6, and fluency in English speaking, a little Japanese.
     Excellent skills in writing business reports and marketing analysis.

    Education:
    From Oct.2000 to June.2005: Shanghai university, major in international trade and economic.

    Relevant course work:
    Macroeconomics Microeconomics
    Essentials of Econometrics Accounting
    Cameralistics International Settlements
    Statistics International Trade Theory
    International Trade Practice Marketing
    Organization Behavior Economic Laws

    Work experience:
    I have worked as an agency in Pacific Anta insurance company for one year from 6.2002 to 5.2003.


    Cover letter
    Dear sir or Madam,
    I am writing this letter to you for the position of commerce assistant in Mezi Mebia (shanghai) Co, LTD.
    Some days ago, I found that Mezi Mebia (shanghai) Co, LTD want a commerce assistant and I am very interested in the position. I will graduate from shanghai university next year; I want to begin my career with such a challenge position. I’m sure your company will teach me much, and I will take much advantageous knowledge to your company.
    I am sure that I am the right person for this position. I satisfy the job requirements you mentioned on your website. Although I am a new fresh man and lack of experience, I can fit the environment and learn from daily work soon.
    I am looking forward to hearing from you.

    Yours sincerely,
    Daniel

  2. #2
    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Summary of Qualification:

    Summary of Qualifications


    I am writing this letter to you for the position of commerce assistant

    I am writing to apply for the position...

  3. #3
    budaniel Guest
    thank everyone for reading my resume and coverletter!

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Dear sir or Madam,

    Can you spot the mistake here?

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